Post by -khan_locked- on Jan 14, 2015 17:49:30 GMT -5
Hello, and welcome to the new, shiny School of Roleplay! Our first lesson is pretty short: a basic way to make a better, longer post.
Describe things that arent't necessary. Like so:
BEFORE: Victor walked into the room and sat down across from the Shadow.
AFTER: Victor walked into the room, his shoes tapping loudly on the golden hardwood floor. He took a seat on the cream-coloured loveseat across the table from Shadow. Crossing his legs and placing his hands below his chin, he leaned back and began to think.
And there you have it! If you'd like me to give you feedback on a post you improved using this lesson, post a link below and I'll look at it!
Describe things that arent't necessary. Like so:
BEFORE: Victor walked into the room and sat down across from the Shadow.
AFTER: Victor walked into the room, his shoes tapping loudly on the golden hardwood floor. He took a seat on the cream-coloured loveseat across the table from Shadow. Crossing his legs and placing his hands below his chin, he leaned back and began to think.
And there you have it! If you'd like me to give you feedback on a post you improved using this lesson, post a link below and I'll look at it!
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